User blog comment:Garhdo/Unhappy with the ending? Make your own!/@comment-1786741-20130225182538

I'm not quite sure what I would add at the moment but I can tell you what I would take out. First, starbrat would be gone. No more Casper the Genocidal Ghost. Harby could easily replace him. Second, I'd get rid of the "organics vs. synthetics" bull. I'm not sure what I would replace it with at the moment, but I'm thinking of possibly elaborating the dark energy draft. Third, I'd make sure there were options for Shepard to either die (a glorified game over screen), sacrifice him or herself, and the possibility of surviving into the epilogue. Lastly, I'd make the Crucible a tad less Deus Ex Machina. Maybe make it so that it only weakens the Reapers enough to bring them down to a level playing field rather than a solve-all energy beam. I might add to this later but that's all I can come up with off the top of my head.