User blog comment:Mr. Mittens/The Worst Fan Comic I've Ever Read./@comment-4950455-20120817232319

More random thoughts after rereading the last few pags:


 * What exactly happened to Evil Zombie Clone Mordin (or, as I like to call him, 'Nidrom')? I was eventually able to figure out how Enaht and Nadiak were defeated, but he just disappears.
 * Why didn't the Illusive Man just grow a mustache and twirl it while he was at it?
 * WHY does Shepard have a duck bill in one panel on page 11?
 * Also on page 11, why is Garrus screaming "AIEEE"?
 * What is Vigil doing there, and more importantly, why does it look like the Collector General?
 * Harbinger's last words are perhaps the most hilariously nonsensical thing in the entire comic, including inexplicable interspecies reproduction and the Reaper "homeworld".
 * Why does the color scheme keep switching between full-color and monochrome? Page 13 is particularly hard to follow thanks to the inexplicable all-blue color scheme.

I honestly want to see the "sequel" comic - by the looks of that character sheet, it's probably even worse than this one.