User blog comment:SpartHawg948/An Open Letter Regarding Mass Effect: Deception/@comment-71.201.140.84-20120208032507

...Eh, am almost done with the book, but their are a few things that I found confusing. One being grammer errors, plotlines that was a bit hard to follow, and misuse of alien culture speak. One that really got me was when a volus said, "Earth people" volus don't do that, they always say "clan" after saying what beings their are, or who they are. Also at the end of chapter 15 the last paragraph made no sense. I understood what happened it just made no sense. It is still a good read and it made sense as to what am hearing about in Mass Effect 3. Don't want to spoil anything but it makes sense now. Still a lot of minor errors really hamper the reading.