User blog:Xaero Dumort/I'm going to attempt to rewrite Mass Effect: Deception

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That is the first post of my re-write of the prologue. I'm going to attempt to write about 1 chapter per day. Bear with small things as I don't have an editor. But I am open to constructive criticism and suggestions for improvement of the work.--Xaero Dumort 22:03, February 1, 2012 (UTC)