User blog comment:JakePT/Deception Out, Response Abysmal/@comment-217683-20120131093616

Sorry if this has already been posted, but there is an open document on Google Docs dedicated to documenting all the error. You can find a link to it in the Kotaku article Yuoaman linked below. I made it through the first two, and thought my head was going to explode. The Citadel is described as being star-shaped, and there is (in this piece of crap... I mean, this novel) a batarian embassy on the Citadel.

This is a colossal piece of garbage. I'm guessing the only "research" Dietz did for the novel was to talk to a preteen who had played through the games once. I mean, there's just no way someone could make this many stupid mistakes if they'd played the games or read the other novels.