Forum:Plot Quotes

What's there now.

Plot
The announcement trailer depicts scenes of destruction in the city of London on Earth while an injured sniper fires from Big Ben. A British voice, presumably that of the Sniper, tells of a well coordinated attack on Earth that left 2 million dead in the first day, 7 million in the first week, every defence annihilated and all forces on the run...............

What I want.

Plot
Earth is burning. Striking from beyond known space, a race of terrifying machines have begun their destruction of the human race. As Commander Shepard, an Alliance Marine, your only hope for saving mankind is to rally the civilizations of the galaxy and launch one final mission to take back the Earth. Official Plot Summary

The announcement trailer depicts scenes of destruction in the city of London on Earth while an injured sniper fires from Big Ben. A British voice, presumably that of the Sniper, tells of a well coordinated attack on Earth that left 2 million dead in the first day, 7 million in the first week, every defence annihilated and all forces on the run...............

Comments
Just throwing this out there. I think it looks considerably better. I already know the admins well enough that they do not share my taste, at all, so this will probably go no where, but there you go... JakePT 02:29, December 12, 2010 (UTC)