User talk:JakePT/Sandbox/Mass Effect 2

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Ok here is something that I feel needs to be addressed. Way too much was cut out to start with. So I'll list the problems I see. Overall you cut way to much information to the article for it to be an article now.
 * 1) The propotional content table needed to stay becuase the DLC page doesn't do a good enough job expalining it. Moving the table there wouldn't help becuase it deals with the release, and while yes most have been released with other packs, it still needs to be here.
 * 2) The promotional bonus items also needs to stay becuase of conflicting evidence whether or not they are still avaliable.
 * 3) Using a template for the detalis just doesn't really work becuase way to much detail, most of it, was cut out. There is a lot of detalil in the PC version of the current article that needs to stay. Actually all of it needs to stay. Just put the two secitons together with level three headings for the the 360 and PC.
 * 4) Keeping the relevent info about hte squad and returning characters is a very good idea and all of that needs to stay.
 * 5) The info about the plot should go after the spoiler. While not a plot spoiler, it is still a spoiler.
 * 6) The Locations can go really.
 * 7) Too much slashing on the Gameplay section. I can't even tell what is new now. Way too much info was cut and the seciton lost its overall style. If that is the new section, then it would be better for it to go altogether.
 * 8) Way to much info slashed on the DLC section. Not everyone who comes here knows that we have the DLC page, so the information on this page, is still a very good idea.