User blog comment:Ygrain/Long Days, Long Nights 2/@comment-5287758-20120922135510

You portrayed the massacre very well, exactly as it would have happened. I was getting chills up my spine from the moment the squads separated. The slaughter was quick, calculating and brutal. If they made a movie out of it, it would have looked something out of a horrible nightmare, possibly worse. Excellent narration I must say. The mood was light in the first few paragraphs with Toshio's jackassing(I love this guy), but suddenly went to suspense and then to a hellish outcome. Very good writing. I can't wait to read the next part.