User blog comment:The Milkman/Citadel Review: Entertaining and Inconsequential/@comment-4721065-20130307094007/@comment-4237253-20130307100706

Yeah, but I think they could have made it work. Either way, the tone is off. That's just the best suggestion I can give.

I get what you're saying though. To me, if feels as though this is an after-battle party. That said, I'm just trying to analyse the plot as best I can from an objective view point.