Talk:Storyline III

Cleanup
So, as is noted, this article needs quite a bit of work. Unfortunately, I have not yet read the novel in question, and as such cannot make more than cursory spelling edits (of which there were many), fearing even to make grammar edits lest the whole book be spoiled for me. Basically, all I did was make a bunch of spelling and race name fixes, as well as removing one puzzling bit (removing the 'word' "ultimating" from the sentence 'They managed to kill one of the Turians[sic], yet a grenade hit them, ulitmating[sic] leaving his two guards exposed to, and killed by the Turians[sic] gunfire.'[emphasis added] Again, not having read the book and not knowing the context, I have no clue if this should be ultimately, eliminating, or any of the many suggestions spell check has, so I just removed it) So... if someone who has read the book wants to take a machete and start hacking away, I would be forever in their debt (as long as they don't ever intend on collecting! :P) SpartHawg948 22:40, July 29, 2010 (UTC)