User blog comment:JakePT/Deception Out, Response Abysmal/@comment-1691295-20120131101404

I've made a blog post of the first half of the issues in the Google Doc here. So far I've counted 6 major issues, 11 moderate ones, 11 insignificant ones, 14 that can safely be ignored, and 3 that in my mind are perfectly valid canon.

Also, Spart, I shot you an email, would be great if you could check it out.