Talk:Citadel: I Remember Me

Intro missing something?

 * She was from the Mindoir colony by batarian slavers — the same raid that killed your family.

I have not played this assignment yet, but there seems to be something missing in this sentence, my guess:


 * She was from the Mindoir colony that had been attacked by batarian slavers — on the same raid that killed your family.

— AEon (talk) 12:50, October 10, 2012 (UTC)