User blog comment:Ygrain/Long Days, Long Nights 6/@comment-5287758-20121031101325

Sorry for my late reply. I was away for some time. I searched your My Works section and no Chapter 6 was listed. Anyway, excellent writing as usual. Alliance admirals involved with the operation eh? Good use of the fact that Cerberus had high levels of infiltration in the Alliance. And Anderson arriving to save Shepard wasn't unexpected, going by the their close friendship in your fan-fic lore.

If I may, I found a couple of mistakes.

1. "a mess of red swollen flesh, cracked scabs and yellow puss." I think the last word should be pus.

2. "It is up to Romero, of course, to transfer these into a normal spectre". The word is spectrum/spectra.

Anyway, excellent conclusion to the Akuze fic. I look forward too more fan-fics. And by the way, pls update your My Works section.