User blog comment:Mexican215/The New Enemy of The Mass Effect Universe/@comment-6293599-20130923164530

nordic what part of the reapers lore is changed by writing unwritten history of the leviathans? the leviathans themselves dont know their origin, and when asked what they are they simply respond" we are something more", your right making the leviathans sympathetic goes against their nature too much, so to fix that, instead they contacted everyone because they know that they would not be able to hide, for whoever sent the message already knows of the leviathans presence so to warn everyone was their best chance of survival. yea the next char does not have to be related to shep in any way but having that option would be nice, you seem to be forget that these are all just ideas that you can be helping to improve. the catalyst says this"The memories of the Leviathans used to create Harbinger were preserved as the Reaper's gestalt consciousness" so no it did not say they were self aware but that they had a consciousness. So that was just bad choice of words, however if something is conscious than it is aware of itself and its surroundings. so to say something has a consciousness can be interpreted as saying it is self aware. " Plus, if there were any renegade Reapers, they would be destroyed with extreme prejudice." what point were you trying to rebuttal with that? of course they would be destroyed, in my timeline of ME4 probaly bout half the game would be fighting the renegade reapers. you say that the NE contradict lore and are a retread of the reapers. please point out exactly what part it contradicts instead of simply " pretty much contradicts lore" obviously i looked over something if i dont know what im contradicting. as for retread of the reapers, in what ways? so far what i have written for the NE is that they are beings of energy that created the leviathans to basically heard together the creatures that the NE feed on. how is that a retread of the reapers, when the reapers were created by an ai with a mandate to preserve life, by harvesting the organic material from advanced species to preserve their organic data and prevent them from ever creating synthetics that would wipe them out. also reapers are not original in having a harvest cycle for life. War of the worlds for example by far predates Mass Effect. and if your trying to insult me by saying im terrible at writing your wasting your time, i already know that, and is one of the major reasons why i posted this blog so i can get Mass Effect fans to edit and contribute to my shortcomings.