User blog comment:Kaloneous/Mass Effect 3 Ending DLC Denied and PAX/@comment-4933332-20120405231522/@comment-4933332-20120406012827

nah, I'll be hopeless in writing dialogue and making people say things in a natural way.

In all my suggestion in improving the story, I always bring up general principles but never the specific dialogue because I wouldn't know how to do that correctly. Also my grammar is pretty terrible as well.

really, the whole character drives the plot is really a basic rule of storytelling that every competent writer should know about (but for some reason this mistake keep on happening all the time), I'm really not saying anything new or advance here.