User blog comment:Ygrain/Long Days, Long Nights 5/@comment-4237253-20121015161903

Very good work capturing the feel of the situation. I liked the use of short sentences, it helped to convey Shepard's feeling of exhaustion and just how brutal their predicament is. It kind of makes me wish this back story was referenced more in the trilogy, because such an event is very traumatic. Why can't Shepard at least exhibit some signs of PTSD? Not even a little survivor guilt? Jack was all kinds of messed up, and she it easy by comparison!

Oh, I mean Shepard can have nightmares about one dead kid, but a unit of 50 Men massacred, leaving Shepard a sole survivor? Pssh. Whatever.