User talk:Lancer1289/Sandbox/Prologue: Find the Beacon

Quick comment- in the first section ('Normandy Comm Room'), I'd suggest placing a comma between enter and Nihlus. (So, "When you enter, Nihlus Kryik'). Otherwise it sounds like you are entering Nihlus, which has some rather... interesting connotations. SpartHawg948 20:16, April 25, 2010 (UTC)