User talk:DeldiRe/Sandbox/N7 HQ

Looking good
The page is coming around nicely. Aside from minor clumsiness, there still seems to be some syntax issues in the text, especially with references to different profiles and users; unfamiliar as I am with the N7 HQ site, in some cases it's unclear to me which profile is being referred to. (It might also be just me.) I've revised the text in terms of language rather than what the text actually means, so I can't tell whether everything is correct or optimal. But as you said, that'll probably sort itself out once the page is public. Keep up the good work! Elseweyr (talk) 10:00, July 4, 2013 (UTC)