User blog comment:The Milkman/The Writing of the Ending/@comment-5038903-20120530155321/@comment-4237253-20120530173451

I may have mentioned the gasping breat scene. It was short, abrupt, contrived, and shoehorned in. What was the bloody point? They intended for that to be our last moment with our Shepard? A scene so poorly made, so vague in its execution, that we don't even know if it's our character, or where they are?

BioWare (or maybe just Casey Hudson) is really lacking common sense here. What was displayed here was the literary skill of a small child.