User blog comment:The Milkman/The Writing of the Ending/@comment-30764484-20120605044952/@comment-30764484-20120608044632

No, it's been stated that Shep has very stong willpower, never that he can resist indoctrination.

I'm not sure what you mean about the bad writing/lazy point. My point is the only pro-literal evidence is based on these two things.

What if, for a minute, you imagine that BW is not at all lazy, and not at all bad writers? What arguement against IT do you have then?