User blog comment:The Milkman/Indoctrination: You're Doing It Wrong/@comment-4444176-20120622193320/@comment-4237253-20120622201548

Well I'll give you the basics:

1. It introduces a new conflict, leaves it unresolved, then forgets entirely about the old one. For all intents and purposes, that makes it little more than a red herring.

2. There is no set-up. Very few, if any, players can honestly say they were thinking "this is all just Indoctrination, it's so obvious." whilst they were playing the ending. Thus, the "test" is completely arbitrary, and boils down to a 2/3 guessing game.

There's more, but that's off the top of my head, and my blog post.