User blog comment:Ygrain/Between the Past and the Future 4: What Do You Want?/@comment-5287758-20121106153039

You posted this fanfic several hours before on Fanfiction.Net right? I read it there. I follow Memoirs and Legacy on that site.

As usual, excellent writing. Anderson's mentorship to Shepard continues. It also throws a new light on Shepard's past, when he/she was taking the first steps towards an exemplary soldier and a leader. Its nice to read about Shepard's past, however skilled, professional and experienced he/she is in the games, he/she had a beginning.