Talk:Illium: Liara: The Observer

=Pointless Edits=

I had made changes to the article to improve it. According to Mass Effect Wiki:Manual of Style/Missions, the introductory text should be "Text from the in-game journal description (only)." I changed it to reflect the in-game text. There should also be a Mission Summary section at the bottom. The text descriptions for the location of Data Point 1 and 4 were misleading. Shepard does not gain Renegade points upon hacking all terminals. The rewards section was also misleading. Because of all of this, I had decided to replay the mission and rewrite it from scratch to make sure there weren't errors. Yes, I rewrote much more than necessary, but that doesn't mean the edits were pointless. Seburo 19:32, February 12, 2010 (UTC)